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The tears slipped down your face as you stared at the grave stone by your feet.

The sky seemed to agree with you as the rain poured on your body.

Your hand laid on the top of the grave stone as you fell on your knees, wrapping your arms around the cold, big stone.

You snuggled into the ruff surface, scratching your face lightly.

You let a sob out, the mud rubbing on the bottom of your dress and onto your bare skin, the mud sticking to your shoes.

Your hands traced him name, 'Makoto Tachibana.'

You sobbed again, then looked up at the sky, screaming.

"WHY?!" You chocked out, putting your hands into fists and hitting the muddy grass, sniffling loudly.

You looked back at the grave stone, "why Makoto..."

Your lip quivered, the rain starting the pour harder, and you pressed your lips together, getting tired of crying.

The tears still fell, and you closed your eyes, putting your hands on the grass from your sides.

The images flashed in your mind.

The blaring of a horn, the screeching of the tires and the sharp turn.

"I love you, _________, don't you ever forget that..."

It was like he knew he couldn't stop it, like he was accepting it.

You were confused, and you stared at him as he let go of the wheel and kissed you passionately, for the last, and first time.

You almost immediately jerked forward, his lips still pressed harshly on yours.

"I love you so, so very much _________. I love you. I love you. I love you."

He held your hands weakly, the car skidding and flipping upside down.

The windshield cut into your skin, your belt leaving a mark as you hanged upside down.

You let out a pained scream, and turned to Makoto.

His face was cut up, and his eyes were starting to lose the bright light they usually held.

"M-Makoto..." You coughed out, a tear slipping.

His eyes flickered to you, and gave you a small smile, he showed no fear.

"I-I.." He tried to talk, that's when you noticed, the piece of glass lodged threw his throat.

You let out a whimper, the tears falling from you face.

You shushed him, and squeezed his hand tightly.

"I love you too, Makoto. I've always loved you." You paused, "please don't leave me, Makoto..."

You started crying more, the blaring sound of sirens reaching your ears.

He kept smiling, weakly gripping your hand back, "S-So-Sorr-rr-yy..."

His eyes started to close slowly, blood gushing from his throat as he tried speaking.

"S-See-eee yo-yo-you l-l-lat-later..."

His eyes finally closed, and you tried shaking his hand, yelling, screaming, but he just wouldn't open his eyes.

Your eyes widen, and you finally comprehended what was going on.

And then you remembered what he told you when you first met.

You had said goodbye to him, and he shook his head, grabbing your hands, and looking into your sweet (e/c) eyes.

'I don't like that, say see you later! It means that we'll see each other again, it's like a little promise!'

He smiled happily.

You missed him already...

You got out of your trance as the water stopped pouring on you.

You looked up at the sky, noticing the umbrella.

You scowled, looking at the man holding it.

"You're going to get a cold..."

It was Haruka.

You whimpered, your vision still blurry.

The tears still fell from your face as you stood up.

He looked at you plainly, but you could see the pain behind his blue eyes.

You pressed your lips together before tightly wrapping your arms around Haruka.

"Haruka..."

He looked down at you, his arms wrapping around your small frame.

"You know he loves you...right..."

Loves...Not loved...

You nodded into his chest.

He kept the umbrella over your heads and he used his other hand to pet your head lightly, his fingers combing your hair.

You held onto him more, "big brother..."

He tightened his grip on you, "sh..."

You held onto your brother, starting to cry again.

He stayed standing, holding you and swaying lightly.

"He doesn't want this, you know...He doesn't want you crying like this..."

You sniffled and just continued sobbing.

"Stop."

He grabbed you roughly by your shoulders and shook you, "just stop already."

His eyes were glossy, his eyes watering.

"Big brother..."

He dropped the umbrella, hugging you tightly, "he was my friend too, _________!"

He starting crying, resting his head on your shoulder, "he was my friend too..."

He whimpered, and you held his body, your body shaking.

He shook with you, and grasped your hands, lacing his fingers with yours.

"____________, please, lets just go home, please..."

You looked down at Haruka, your face emotionless as the tears slipped down your face.

You stayed silent, and he kept your body close to him.

"No..." You finally breathed out, and he took a sharp breath in.

"I don't want to leave him alone either, but we need to...________..."

You pushed him away roughly, looking at him bitterly, "I CAN'T LEAVE HIM!"

You wiped your tears away, screaming, "You didn't watch him get zipped up in a body bag, Haruka! You didn't watch as they ripped your hand from his! You didn't watch as they tried to bring him back! You didn't get to hear them say he wasn't coming back...Haruka..."

You sobbed again, your knees getting weak, falling again.

A pair of arms grabbed your form, and you looked to Haruka, he was getting the umbrella.

Your breathing hitched, and you looked up, greeted with wet burgundy hair.

He picked you up, bringing you into his chest.

"Just shut up and cry." He said, simply, holding you tightly.

You didn't resist, your hands gripping at his soaked shirt.

He quickly picked you up, walking back to your house.

Haruka followed silently, holding onto one of your hands as your other hand gripped Rin's shirt.

You didn't protest, letting Rin walk up the stairs of your house.

Rin placed you in the bath tub, "take a bath, you probably already caught a cold, moron."

He gave you a sour face, before it softened and he placed his hand on your face, kissing your head softly.

"Don't beat yourself up...You didn't kill him..."

He patted your head and pushed pass Haruka, leaving.

Haruka walked in, starting the bath and hugging you to his chest lightly.

"Please, just don't do anything stupid..."

He looked at you, knowing what you were going to do.

"Please, __________, don't you dare leave without me..."

He petted your head, closing his eyes.

"Please don't make me...Please..."

You nodded slightly, and he took your hands, "tell me you wont."

You looked at him, your eyes dull, "I wont..."

He nodded, and he dropped your hands, stopping the water.

"I'm not going to leave you..."

He put your hands in the water, and scrubbed the dirt off.

You stayed silent as he cleaned off the dirt from your skin, and washing your matted hair.

He got you out and dried you off, getting you into another pair of clothing.

"Come on..."

He took your hand and to the kitchen, "you got to eat."

You snarled, "I don't want to!"

He set you down, "if you don't eat now, I know you wont eat later, so your gonna eat!"

He was probably right, so you stayed quite.

He made some food, and practically forced you to eat it, then put you in bed, sitting at one of the chairs in your room and holding your hand till you fell asleep.

He started drifting off as well, before looking out into the dark night sky, the stars shinning brightly, one standing out.

He let go of your hand, walking to your window, staring at it.

He let out a cold chuckle before pulling out a small piece of paper from his back pocket.

'Take care of her for me. - T.M.' was written poorly on it.

He could only smile down at it, before looking back at the sky.

He heard you shift behind him, but he stayed, staring.

You got up, drowsily walking to him.

You wrapped your arms around his toned one.

"I promise..." He whispered, ever so lightly, you barely catching his words.

"What?" You looked up at him, confused.

He turned to you, giving you a small smile, "it's going to be ok..."

He grasped one of your hands, "he's in the arms of the angels...Waiting for us..."

You looked at him, wide eyed, Haruka didn't believe in angels. He didn't believe in god. He didn't really believe in anything...

"So, just be patient until then, _________. I know its hard at the end of the day. Your heart may never be the same, but just know that he's safe, where he's at. This world is cold, and cruel, but he's some where warm, and peaceful."

You smiled sadly, and nodded, a tear slipping from your face.

He kissed your forehead, gave you a quick hug, then walked out, leaving you alone.

You stood where he was, staring out into the sky.

You caught notice of a big bright shinning star, and smiled lightly, another tear escaping from your eyes.

Your hand reached for the small pendant of a whale before squeezing it tightly, "i'll always love you, Makoto Tachibana..."

The star seemed to shine brighter, and your smile widened.

You walked back to your bed, slipping in it lightly and laying your head on your pillow.

You gripped the necklace over your heart before your eyes began to feel heavy, "you'll always be with me..."

You drifted into a peaceful sleep, unaware of the presence sitting on your windowsill, smiling happily at you.

His words seemed to linger in the air, "I know, _________."

He chuckled lightly, kicking his legs as he smiled, "I knew you would't forget that..."
Oh dear god, not gonna lie, cried at one point while writing this.
._. ((more likely the song than my writing ))
Anyways, I own nothing :)

((the ending sucks ._.))
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:iconalicehumansacrifice8:
THE TEARS WON'T STOP
I CAN'T CRY BECAUSE MY HOUSE IS REALLY QUIET BUT I WANNA CRY
I HAVE A WHALE NECKLACE TOO OMF
STILL CRYING
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Bloodpaw221 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Student Artist
the song was blocked for me and i saw the title  ;-; already know what this going to be TTTT~TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
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Fionna20 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014
Its 1 am, have school later and Damn. The feels. These tears. TT~TT OMG
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AmethystSkylight Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
why????
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agerose15 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Student General Artist
Why must the good die young!!!??

:iconcryforeverplz:
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kakumei2246 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014
Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! 

why do the good die young........
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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I am honestly sobbing. I haven't really cried at a fanfic, cried THIS much, at least, since about two months ago. I just.... I felt the raw emotion in this and it just struck. Straight through my mind and into my heart. Applause for decade!
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crazygurl5302 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Student General Artist
YOU MADE ME CRY AND I LOVED IT!!
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Ravens-of-Rome Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Crying Mako 
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:iconrainbowlovesflying:
Rainbowlovesflying Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
So beautiful but so tragic,
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melodypony123321 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I  Am crying right now
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GuppieF Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014
Oh god, there aren't many fanfics that can bring me on the verge of tears, but you just managed to make me cry, so I hope you're happy now

It was reallt a good story!
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FrozenMLPfan Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Student Artist
Right in the feels, great job
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animecopy18 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Pikachu Crying Plz me the whole time after the flashback.
This is a good one but its also so beautiful..... I can't stop crying
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Kittykittyloveiscute Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
I Wanna Cry T_T - begins to cry - THE FEELS! 
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hellokittyasdf Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014
I am so crying right now 
The feels man the feels
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pikalemons Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I admittedly don't cry at much.
So, me crying at this, even if it was just a single tear (dramatic right?) was something to ponder about.
Thank you.
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Seraphina-Parks-22 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
it so sad and beautiful in so many ways you did a very beautiful job at writing this story it made me have tears in my eyes
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Animegirl0091 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
At first I didn't want to read cause I knew where it was going but then I thought I should give it a chance. You made me bawl! Q.Q I couldn't watch the video cause it wasn't workin for me for some reason, but just reading the story alone made me cry. :'(
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KanakoSaku07 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Bleedrainbow The FEEEEEEEEELSSSSSS~!
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sherlockstiger Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
So many feels!!!!! I was just literally most of the way through T-T but it's so good to !
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Neko-Neko-Jenniferrr Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Student Writer
Ohmygosh stop I'm crying right now OMIGERD WHY U HAVE TO BE A TALENTED FEELS WRITER TT^TT
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Amberdango Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
I was crying while reading the first line!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Amberdango Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
Also the ending was beautiful!!!!
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ScytheMeister90 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student Writer
ARG! Why would you do this!? This is such a good story but WAH! MAKOTO DIDN'T DESERVE IT! THE SONG MADE IT SO MUCH MORE POWERFUL! *cries*
Makoto Tachibana (Dance) [V1] This gentle and sweet guy didn't have to die! Pikachu Crying Plz  
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MorgannePhaedras Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
WHY! WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO ME!! Good story, btw. WHY WOULD YOU MAKE ME LISTEN TO THAT SONG!!!
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AndromedaTheRoma Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
..... Y u make me listen to this song while reading?! *Crying hard* 
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Miss-Fandom-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*crying* I shouldn't have read this, it was too sad, Makoto is one of my fave characters ((I only watched a few episodes, but he's a sweetie))and I'm still crying cause of it. Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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Nat-Contreras1999 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This story was very go- icon_cry . . . God, sorry. . . It was amazing. . . :crying: DAMN IT!!!!! CAN'T STOP CRYING!!!!!! Hibiya Amamiya (Crying) [V1] 
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Nat-Contreras1999 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
. . . it-. . . was so hard . . . not to cry. . . I couldn't stop. . . a-and I . . . usually never cry. . . oh God. . . :'( I-I don't want. . . sorry. . . OH GOD! DAMN IT!!!!!! Hibiya Amamiya (Crying) [V1] 
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BatmanMeetsScoobyDoo Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I cried... I actually cried and couldn't read it because my eyes glossed  over and  my  blurry... wow 
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xXdianawestXx Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
This is my third time reading this I tried so hard not to cry but I couldn't 😔💦😭
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Miichan315 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
i always read this before going to bed and at the end i cry and cant get to bed its your fault :iconscaryritsuplz:
btw i really like the story :iconholdfeelsplz: i feel it is more like haru x reader XD but still its so sweet~
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xXxMrsUchihaxXx Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
well, Haru's her brother in this, so in a sense it is, but isn't XDXD
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Miichan315 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014
o...oh? is that so? i really didn't think about it O_o
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xXxMrsUchihaxXx Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
They aren't in a incest relationship. I meant it like a sister brother bond.
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Miichan315 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014
yeah i get it :) sorry for my words last time ;_;
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MomijiSohmaumbreon Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Student General Artist
this is like the first time i cried for a fanfiction and now i am in tears hopefully nobody comes in my room or they will see a crying mess.
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animerocksbitches Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013
I read this in the lesson and i started to cry in class ; - ; Da feels
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mainanase Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
OMG I ALMOST STARTED CRYING THIS SI SO GOOD I CANT HANDLE IT AHHH
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Haruka-Michaelis Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
I'm completely. Crying. The feels. I love you. DX
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Ganbatte526 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I cried so much omg 
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roarlikealion Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
WHY AM I CRYING SO MUCH?! WAWAWA I CAN'T CALM DOWN! D:
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xMentallyHilariousx Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
YOU! MY HEART IS ALL MESSED UP FROM ANGEL BEATS! AND YOU JUST!!!! ... :'-( This was amazing....
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zendeya67 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Student Writer
all the feels i couldnt stop crying i even locked my door so no one can see me crying ALL THE FEELS ARE LOOSE :crying: rvmp crying 5 Minute Emote - Cry :sad: Llama Emoji 08 (Crying) [V1]
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FuckYourFaith Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Student Artist
:iconcutecryplz: WHY!!!
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prettygirlrock69 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Yeah I didn't even finish reading all of it cuz I was starting to get teary eyed, this is REALLY SAD!!!
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AustraliaPalophin Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Feels. Feels everywhere.
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KeiTsubasa25 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
So beautiful that I cried:sad: 
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SoulMasquerade Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
You broke my feels! It hurts but it's so good!
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